Friday, June 26, 2009

Crowku


This morning the crows
are in an uproar; I switch
from blue ink to black.

(first publication)


Recently Linked: My thanks to Chris Lott for signing on as a follower of Recently Banned Literature. Chris writes the blog Cosmopoetica and is currently posting work from his Poem-a-Day project.

Updates:
“Crowku” added to Poems, Slightly Used.

As the Conversation continues, HG Wells meets Yevgeny Zamyatin at Maxim Gorky’s place in St. Petersburg.

15 comments:

S_Allen said...

Woah - This poem astounds me William. It is so good. Two distinct images, ultimately unrelated, but when placed next to each other...wow.

William Michaelian said...

Scott, thanks very much. Glad you like it. Without a doubt, I’ve never heard this many crows at once. I don’t know what got them going. I thought to investigate, but was half afraid I’d find Van Gogh in their midst, dead on the sidewalk at dawn.

Jean Spitzer said...

I love this Crowku.

William Michaelian said...

Thanks, Jean. And this morning, they have been almost completely silent....

brian (baj) salchert said...

Crow convention, mayhaps, or a dispute.

This Crowku is an exemplary English Haiku.

William Michaelian said...

Thanks, Brian. Maybe what they need is a charismatic leader. Or maybe they just did away with one.

RUDHI - DAILY said...

Crows point Haiku is; messengers for Talk and Silence in deep blues and silky blacks... really marvellous feeling-slide!

William Michaelian said...

Rudhi, your illustration goes very well with this poem....

~im just only me~ said...

....Ludwik Adam Mierosławski Krakow 1846

William Michaelian said...

Possibly, but the Van Gogh scenario is more likely.

Lola Koundakjian said...

I love the Crowku too! Congrats, HG!

William Michaelian said...

Thanks, LK. And as you know, I have even more crows between my ears....

~im just only me~ said...

lol aw well, these things happen when you study Central/Eastern European History for five months or more ;)

William Michaelian said...

Well, there’s no better place to get it out of your system. For instance, we also have the illustrious Rabbi Yaakov Gesundheit.

~im just only me~ said...

We may as well throw Dostoevsky and Tolstoy into the mix...*shrugs*


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