Monday, July 6, 2009

First Try


Old crow, you sound like
my father’s outboard motor —
ten horses, no tails.

(first publication)


Updates:
“First Try” added to Poems, Slightly Used.

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3 comments:

Joseph Hutchison said...

Hah! I see you're off and running with crow poems. Good stuff. Puts me in mind of Issa:

a horse farts:
four of five suffer
on the ferryboat

Happy Monday!

S_Allen said...

Ha ha gross - horse farts

William Michaelian said...

Yes, well, Issa was gifted that way. And don’t you love how the horse poem and Joe’s “Happy Monday!” add up to seventeen syllables?