Sunday, September 27, 2009

Crawl Space


The scent of mold so appealing and intense,
I wonder if I’ve been dead before.

(first publication)


Updates:
“Crawl Space” added to Poems, Slightly Used.

In the Forum: a bouncer spurned.

5 comments:

Rachel said...

Who already know...
your thoughts are again very good and again stimulates me to the deeper reflection

liebe Grüße, Rachel

William Michaelian said...

Rachel, hello again, and thank you. I appreciate your visits.

Momo Luna said...

Wow! yes i recognise the intense attraction of the scent of mold. The last line is perfect, never thought that way, but it says a lot.... :-) Sometimes it's hard to find the right words in a foreign language. I hope this make a bit sense. But your poem brought a smile upon my face....

William Michaelian said...

Thank you. Often, it’s hard enough to find the right words in our own language. And then we also have to read between the lines. It’s all a puzzle I enjoy.

Momo Luna said...

Yes, you're right and it's a puzzle i also enjoy. To read between the lines t.i.