Poetry, notes, and drawings by William Michaelian
Beautiful poem, William!These lines are so elegant and I think it is possible to read your text in:"the unnamedrhythm of the stars"
Oh, no! You’ve revealed my plagiarism! You see, I’ve been stealing poems from the stars for some time now....My sincere thanks, Jenny.
heyy William Happy that I stumbled in .. I like reading concise poetry myself and you write very very elegantly, as Jenny said .
Thanks very much, aditya, and it’s nice to see you here again.
Beautiful, William. The last two lines are brilliant, and I have a special affection for "the coffeemaker gasping / gently in the dark." What music!
Thanks, Joe. And all I had to do, really, was write down what I heard. The poem was there before I was....
Hello William, I was about to post my comment quoting "the coffee maker gasping gently in the dark" and how I love and relate to this line, when I read the comment by Joseph Hutchison, which said the same, and then the other line which stuck with me, "the unnamed rhythm of the stars" and then I saw the mention of it by Jenny.Perhaps it's the collective, ‘gasping' upon the beauty of your poem!
Or maybe we’ve all had too much caffeine...? Whatever it is, I certainly appreciate everyone’s kind remarks.
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