Sunday, March 21, 2010

Stillborn


Spring . . . a cold blue dawn
of countless eyes

and more wise
faces than windows

(first publication)


Updates:
“Stillborn” added to Poems, Slightly Used.

In the Forum: dead guys finish first.

10 comments:

ALeks said...

Actually, it does not matter what material you would use,you draw poems by your words or your words draw your poems or your poems draw your faces with countless eyes!
Another gem,perfect fit for my slow,Sunday afternoon! Lovely!

Anthony Duce said...

Good words for this day. Thank you.

Rachel said...

Lieber William,

Frühling in blau und grün und gelb und weiß...

ja, und auch so...

alles Liebe dir,
herzlich, Rachel

William Michaelian said...

Aleksandra — and yours is a lovely comment for my Sunday afternoon... little grandson now asleep, food simmering on the stove... thank you.

Anthony, thanks, I’m glad they strike you as such.

Beautiful, Rachel — and the colors of the day become the colors of our longing and mood.... Always nice to hear from you.

The Scrybe said...

I like this, thank you. More so that it mentions Dawn :)

William Michaelian said...

Thanks. Window-writers unite.

nouvelles couleurs - vienna atelier said...

Lovely this one William

William Michaelian said...

Thank you, Laura.

mettagirl said...

Hello, green spot William,

thank you very much for your invitation.

I just wished to add, as ALeks says, yes, it is not so critical from where one draws inspiration, but rather that one does just draws....

a line, if it must be,
a cold blue dawn,
sketched by the morning light
penned effortlessly....

William Michaelian said...

Hello, Ma-Li, it’s nice to hear from you again. Thanks for your lovely comment.