Poetry, notes, and marginalia by William Michaelian
For Donna Fleischer snowflake and such is the art of falling
:)(when so succinctly put, there is little else to add)
Except that we might think of them as brushstrokes that know always where to land. Thank you, Rahina.
Amazing, William. The way you force the breath into abeyance briefly between the essential (e)motions of perception and thought. Not really haiku—a new form altogether, I think. Don't name it! Just keep doing it....
What amazes me, Joe, is the way you’ve so aptly described the falling snow....
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(when so succinctly put, there is little else to add)
Except that we might think of them as brushstrokes that know always where to land. Thank you, Rahina.
Amazing, William. The way you force the breath into abeyance briefly between the essential (e)motions of perception and thought. Not really haiku—a new form altogether, I think. Don't name it! Just keep doing it....
What amazes me, Joe, is the way you’ve so aptly described the falling snow....
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