Thursday, December 19, 2013

The year it’s been, the life it is

Stake your claim
and fertile be thy bones

a passing train
soon gone

your hat
in the wind

a place
by the road

your face
a field

to loving


Stickup Artist said...

Maybe it's because of an all too recent tragedy in my own life, but this seems a beautiful prayer that could be recited at a memorial service.

timoebasilico said...

Yes this seems a beautiful prayer, i according with Stickup Artist, give Peace and hopness, i love it...
"Your Face
A Field"...
I can't describe how much i like all this poeme

William Michaelian said...

That one word, “prayer,” was with me all through the making of this poem. And now that prayer is beautifully answered. Thank you both.